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When you read it...
Posted: 16 Mar 2012, 12:44
by Dropdeadqt
Re: When you read it...
Posted: 16 Mar 2012, 14:20
by midi
Quick, remove it before Phil has a stroke over that grammar.
I miss those english lessons, lol.
Re: When you read it...
Posted: 16 Mar 2012, 14:38
by Philondra
I...I don't even understand what it's trying to say.
Re: When you read it...
Posted: 16 Mar 2012, 15:06
by Dropdeadqt
a -> at a
Re: When you read it...
Posted: 16 Mar 2012, 19:03
by dukkha
I prefer to think it's missing parenthetical commas. "feared abducted by her ex-boyfriend, a school toilet block, has been found"
Re: When you read it...
Posted: 16 Mar 2012, 19:49
by Handofdesu
it's missing at a.
Even when i read it with your corrections dukkha, it still seems like her exboyfriend is the toilet.
Re: When you read it...
Posted: 17 Mar 2012, 01:35
by dukkha
That was the intent of my correction. I wasn't trying to make it accurate, I was trying to clarify the important issue of girls dating toilet blocks.
Re: When you read it...
Posted: 18 Mar 2012, 01:10
by Cartollomew
Stolen Painting Found By Tree, etc etc.
Pretty turgid prose even with the correction.