When you read it...

Post by **midi** » 16 Mar 2012, 14:20

Quick, remove it before Phil has a stroke over that grammar.

I miss those english lessons, lol.

Post by **Philondra** » 16 Mar 2012, 14:38

I...I don't even understand what it's trying to say.

Post by **Dropdeadqt** » 16 Mar 2012, 15:06

a -> at a

Post by **dukkha** » 16 Mar 2012, 19:03

I prefer to think it's missing parenthetical commas. "feared abducted by her ex-boyfriend, a school toilet block, has been found"

Post by **Handofdesu** » 16 Mar 2012, 19:49

it's missing at a.

Even when i read it with your corrections dukkha, it still seems like her exboyfriend is the toilet.

Post by **dukkha** » 17 Mar 2012, 01:35

That was the intent of my correction. I wasn't trying to make it accurate, I was trying to clarify the important issue of girls dating toilet blocks.

Post by **Cartollomew** » 18 Mar 2012, 01:10

Stolen Painting Found By Tree, etc etc.

Pretty turgid prose even with the correction.

Molotov